PW-39 (NA): FEAR OF FALLING

MENTOR: Cora Carmack

MENTEE: Megan Just

TITLE: FEAR OF FALLING

CATEGORY/GENRE: New Adult

WORD COUNT: 87,000

 

PITCH:

After her stunt pilot father’s horrific death, a daredevil rock-climber is the last person April should be falling for. Because in one month her documentary internship will have them meeting on a perilous cliff. She’ll be filming. He won’t be using a rope.

 

EXCERPT:

April stared at the tent ceiling. She could actually see it now that dawn had arrived. She could also see her breath. It had been that cold last night.

Filming in Yosemite would take about three months. That was ninety nights.

She’d barely survived one.

How was she going to make it through eighty-nine more?

Her throat was raw, and her nose dripping like mad. She’d hardly slept with all the creaky tree branches and eerie animal noises making her mind replay scenes from slasher movies. The few times she’d drifted off, she awoke in a claustrophobic panic inside the tiny sleeping bag, her pajamas twisted around her like a tourniquet.

Worst of all, if bladders could physically burst, hers was about to. She couldn’t stall any longer. She had to get out of the tent.

April wiggled out of her sleeping bag. The freezing air bit at her skin as she changed out of her pajamas in record time.

She reached for the tent door and hesitated. It had been dark when she arrived last night and she had no idea what—or who—was outside. She really didn’t want to start her internship and re-meet her crewmates in daylight with a crust of dried drool on her cheek.

Pain shot across her abdomen. If she didn’t get a move on, there was going to be an accident.

She unzipped the tent and peeked outside. Madigan, the director of photography, was over at the picnic table.

He turned around. Oh, God.

Author: Brenda Drake

New York Times bestselling author of Thief of Lies (Library Jumpers #1), Guardian of Secrets (Library Jumpers #2), Touching Fate (Fated Series #1), and Cursing Fate (Fated Series #2) available now, creator of #PitchWars, #PitchMadness, and #PitMad, fueled by coffee and Goldfish crackers (but not together), and represented by Peter Knapp with The Park Literary Group. @brendadrake

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  1. I’d like to take a look at this! Can you send me the first 50 pages? Queryemily at forewordliterary dot com! Thanks.

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  2. I’d love to read more.

    Please send me the full manuscript in a word document with the pitch/query as page 1. Email furyqueries [@] thebentagency.com

    Thanks!
    ~Louise Fury

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